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Comment by Gail Creelman on November 3, 2009 at 10:05pm

I look forward to your other one and you're right, God never turns away those who seek him. I'm soooo glad or life would be a waiste. He's been such a big help lately as I've been seeking him more. It's amazing what prayer and perserverence bring your way! :)

Comment by Shimeque Smith on October 24, 2009 at 2:59pm

I understand, but with God's help we'll all make it :) It's all in his hands and he would never turn away from his children.... I'll right the other one sometime soon but it is a bit long so I'll write bit by bit and post them... maybe like a story :)

Comment by Gail Creelman on October 23, 2009 at 11:22pm

I understand more than you know. Something my sister and I went through is Greek to everyone else unless they've been through the same thing.

Comment by Shimeque Smith on October 23, 2009 at 9:54pm

Yep Gail something I went through. Sometimes it bothers me. I think poem is the only way to express it... no one seem to quite get it when explained other wise....

Comment by Gail Creelman on October 22, 2009 at 11:29pm

This is really good. Is this something you're going through, what you see someone else going through or are you just in deep thought about this?

Comment by Shimeque Smith on October 11, 2009 at 10:46am

In a World

Trapped in a world full of despair,
Filled of people who fail to be fair,
People who'll see others franticly afraid,
And only mutter, 'why are you so scared?'

Closed in, in a world where the innocent lay,
Where the guilty are alert and just awaiting the prey,
Where storms always wake, and the hearts left to flare,
where souls are dark and life open to fear.

Caved in, in a world where battles are fought,
where there are endless choices of life's rugged path,
where people search and people roam,
looking for thie room in the rising foam.

Pacing in a world, where the choices we make,
will stick to use for our dear sake
where we can finally control where our future lay,
and then have the opportunity to see the horizon's shining ray.

Comment by Shimeque Smith on October 10, 2009 at 9:05pm

Nice Daisy it truely is I'll share one with you guys soon

Comment by Daisy on October 9, 2009 at 5:53pm

lol Thanks, but that really wasn't much of a poem... ^_^"

Comment by Savannah on October 9, 2009 at 2:42pm

of course you have Daisey, look at the 'in the dark' poem you wrote. it was great.

Comment by Daisy on October 1, 2009 at 10:57pm

I love reading poetry, but I've never been very good at writing it :]

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